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Kenneth Mills's avatar

Hypnotic, soothing, and troubling. Forgetfulness of my own. And my mind kept being drawn to my four young-adult sons

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miter's avatar

Four! My goodness. Thank you, Kenneth.

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Angel L. Martinez's avatar

Your voice suits the music perfectly. I was listening to Sparks’ “I Predict” just before this and it’s a perfect segue. The instrumental is a solid fusion. I once studied portraiture as a methodology, so I definitely enjoyed the final stanza, for all the Beat poetry allusions you made!

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miter's avatar

Oh wow thanks, Angel. I have been listening to a good amount Sparks lately, so great. It was a kids ukulele with a random out of tune tuning that started it.

Also, apologies I owe you a tape in the mail, the holidays threw me off but I’ll get this out soon!

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Gadzooks Marchmain's avatar

I keep thinking about the "fuel of self-portraiture". A wonderful turn of phrase. Like the opiate of a lost generation.

It was via Adam Curtis I came across the idea that the legacy of 20th century psychology is that self is just a story we tell ourselves. presumably born in Nietzsche's ideas about the will?

Is this why youth seeks a canvas for survival of the self? Hello Facestackagram.

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miter's avatar

Thank you! Yes, I see what you mean, I wasn't thinking that precisely or eruditely with the "fuel of self-portraiture" phrase, but it fits with the idea of children being reflections of one's self and somehow soothing to one's self-image...for better or worse. There's some connection between selfies and taking pictures of your kids for the gram, etc. etc.

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Kevin Alexander's avatar

I'm really enjoying this one (literally; I'm playing it as I type, while work is a dumpster fire).

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miter's avatar

Thanks man! Good luck with the dumpster fire, hope you emerge unscathed.

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Kevin Alexander's avatar

Thanks! It worked out in the end. I guess that's one upside to having things go sideways first thing in the morning.

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Chloe Hope's avatar

Your lyrics are gorgeous!! 🙌

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miter's avatar

Thanks so much, Chloe, that means a lot! ♥️♥️♥️

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Jason McBride's avatar

This song filed me with an exuberance I forgot I could feel!

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miter's avatar

This comment filled me with exuberance! Cheers.

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